Whatcha think of this? Please look?

Falling deeper in a black hole, you left me in your wake, guess I wasn't catching your drift, but for heavens sake, we used to love each other, said we'd never leave each other, how could you forget, the promises, they felt so divine, but you had to intertwine, our emotions, �we use to be an ocean, love set us flowin', put us in a raft and set us rowin', didn't see the storm God was storin', in our path, just past the clear blue sky's, put us in a foreign life, brought out hate we'd been stowin', away, love was a useless castaway, I screamed for you to stay, but knew you wouldn't sway, wouldn't see it my way, may be better this way, now I won't see your face, cuz if I did I'd race, to get back in your good grace.